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read my free new serialised book
Posted: Fri Dec 07, 2007 3:10 pm
by eroticartist
Read my new exciting serialised book online with new chapters every day at
Mike Freeman
Re: read my free new serialised book
Posted: Fri Dec 07, 2007 7:05 pm
by Snow Patrol
WOW! Brilliant!
Im half way through the first segmant. VERY GOOD INDEED...
Im enjoying it immensly... THANKS... Will finish off later
Thanks again ! GREAT READ
Re: read my free new serialised book
Posted: Sat Dec 08, 2007 6:18 am
by biffalo
A really great read, Mike. Enjoyed it very much.
Re: read my free new serialised book
Posted: Sat Dec 08, 2007 10:30 pm
by Snow Patrol
Naive Question I know... But what the fuck is a 'Ding Dong'?
I know its a drink, but I have NEVER heard of it, and Im nearly turning 40!
Is it some kinda cokney rhyming slang, or a real drink ? LOL
Re: read my free new serialised book
Posted: Sun Dec 09, 2007 4:15 am
by Simon
Bells whisky..
A great read so far, good luck with it Mike.
Re: read my free new serialised book
Posted: Tue Dec 11, 2007 9:29 am
by duff paddy
Excellent stuff - I'm assuming that it's a true story because of your explanatory notes at the end of page 1 - either way, the characters are wholly believable and very well depicted. It also conveys the atmosphere during that era in London perfectly.
Assuming that's what you want, I'd have thought that with a few grammatical nips and tucks, there's no reason it shouldn't get published.
A riveting read - thanks. I will be following daily !cool!